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Don't worry about it too much :joy: I write messy stuff too.

Here's my story, Donnie the Fighting Psychopath! Hope you enjoy! There's a strip at the end, and some scenes in, and after episode three that can definitely get messy. Exactly how much you plan to read, I don't know.

Also, the first episode may be a little hard to read due to a small textbox/crammed panels issue. It's something I'm well aware of, and have actively been trying to fix while making minimal changes to the illustrations. Just a heads up.

Thank you so much! I really need some feedback on the latest chapters of the series (chapters 4-6, the 7th one has yet to finish). Many other creators have reviewed the first three chapters, but I never asked an opinion on the latest ones. I would like to know if the plot is engaging, if the pacing is ok and if the characters are interesting. They haven't had much character development yet, though, because the story is still in its initial arcs.

Also, if you want, feel free to review chapter 7 so far.

Here's my comic:

If I counted correctly, it seems you've gotten your five. But since you're okay with people posting after that, I'll throw my hat into the ring. It's quite long right now, so don't feel the need to read it all. Thanks for the opportunity!

Hi! I've never really gotten feedback on my comic, as I'm too shy to show my family or friends, I would be happy to receive some :blush: I sometimes get the feeling that the way I tell/show the story is too childish or over the top...

Hey! I've currently got 2 chapters out, it's not alot to sink your teeth into but it probably won't take too much of your time either. It's a scifi dark comedy with a little bit of action - not much rn but it's in the works! if you have the time then I'd really appreciate it.

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