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Hi

I'm a new author and have been posting my books on Tapas for a few weeks. And the support I've gotten from the community on this forum has really helped me as a writer. So, I've decided to give back to this amazing community by doing reviews and giving feedback to creators on their books/comics (please note that as I'm not an artist, I'll only give feedback on your story as I personally feel I'm not knowledgeable enough to give feedback on your art.)

At the moment, I'll only be doing reviews for the first 5 people who respond to this thread. However, if you want feedback but 5 people have already responded, feel free to just leave your work on this thread, as I may land up wanting to give more reviews. Also, if you have more that one book/comic, please leave a link to one book/comic that you really want reviewed. You can alternatively leave all your book/comic links, but please know that I'll only do one book/comic and it'll be my choice.

As for what I'm willing to review/give feedback, I'm happy to do any genre but pure smut books/comics. I can read books/comics on Tapas, Webtoons, Webnovel and Wattpad. Also, if you have any questions or things (like character/plot development) you want me to look at while reading your work, please add them along with your book/comic link. My reviews will mostly look at plot/character development, flow and pace of story and overall enjoyment.

Please also note that once I've read your work, I'll DM you my thoughts through this forum. If you want me to send you my thoughts through another means of communication, I can do emails, discord or Instagram. (Please let me know if you want to use one of these and DM me the contact details)

This is not a feedback for feedback thread, but if you want to do feedback for feedback, please feel free to look at my two books or even give other creators who post on this thread feedback. Also, feel free to promote your work on this thread.

Forgotten - Fantasy Retelling:

The Rising Darkness - Dark Fantasy and Action:

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Don't worry about it too much :joy: I write messy stuff too.

Here's my story, Donnie the Fighting Psychopath! Hope you enjoy! There's a strip at the end, and some scenes in, and after episode three that can definitely get messy. Exactly how much you plan to read, I don't know.

Also, the first episode may be a little hard to read due to a small textbox/crammed panels issue. It's something I'm well aware of, and have actively been trying to fix while making minimal changes to the illustrations. Just a heads up.

Thank you so much! I really need some feedback on the latest chapters of the series (chapters 4-6, the 7th one has yet to finish). Many other creators have reviewed the first three chapters, but I never asked an opinion on the latest ones. I would like to know if the plot is engaging, if the pacing is ok and if the characters are interesting. They haven't had much character development yet, though, because the story is still in its initial arcs.

Also, if you want, feel free to review chapter 7 so far.

Here's my comic:

If I counted correctly, it seems you've gotten your five. But since you're okay with people posting after that, I'll throw my hat into the ring. It's quite long right now, so don't feel the need to read it all. Thanks for the opportunity!

Hi! I've never really gotten feedback on my comic, as I'm too shy to show my family or friends, I would be happy to receive some :blush: I sometimes get the feeling that the way I tell/show the story is too childish or over the top...

Hey! I've currently got 2 chapters out, it's not alot to sink your teeth into but it probably won't take too much of your time either. It's a scifi dark comedy with a little bit of action - not much rn but it's in the works! if you have the time then I'd really appreciate it.