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Apr 2024

Drop your most evil MC or tell us about their deeds. My novel is quite new "Star of Salvation" with an evil MC that is trying to destroy the world. Basically if you don't mind reading some pschological warfare going on between character then would recommend checking it out. A heads up the novel will get quite graphic overtime (you will know what I mean when you read the first sentence of the first chapter)

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I wouldn't consider Baul evil, more a force of nature. She has done things that would be questionable to a normal person, but she isn't normal. The normal good/evil really doesn't exist for her.

Well, mine's not evil, but she's done some pretty messed up things, as you can see from this excerpt


Maybe I should have gone anyway - just to spite Kattar. Just to make his blood boil.

I was angry at him for bursting my bubble, for simultaneously shoving me aside and outside of the pretty perfect world his mother wanted to bring me into - that I wanted to - needed to be part of.

But that was forever ago. I was just sixteen - and hurt and angry…

I’m 28 now - angry and hurt.

If he does love me, I wish he would have just said so instead of fighting against my happiness - with him and without.

Do you want me or not, idiot?! If you love me then say so - instead of trying to keep me in a little box - a princess in a tower - just in case -

Just in case he ever does decide to condescend to say something.

If I was a little louder, I’d say it to his face. But it’s never been my way…

When my mother did die, my senior year - after 3 years of rehab - and relapse - and rehab again - I think it was Kattar’s obvious, albeit quiet, disapproval that kept Mrs. Moon from going through with her plan of adopting me.

So maybe he wanted a girlfriend instead of a sister - maybe.

A part of me - maybe all of me, hopes that he does - hopes that that pained, quiet fire I see in his eyes is because he likes me too - and I hope it hurts - just as much as his silence hurt me - hurts me.

It’s been twelve years and I’m bitter. It’s been twelve years and I don’t - don’t care.

It’s not every day you get to break your heartbreaker's heart.