Yeah, here's some suggestions! :]
"Three days research for nothing" missing "of" (Three days of research for nothing)
"saturn" should be capitalized, it is a proper noun
"I dare to say its fabricated" missing apostrophe (I dare to say it's fabricated)
"Let's go home sister" missing comma, (Let's go home, sister)
"Im leaving" missing apostrophe, (I'm leaving)
"and i wii be there this night" i should be capitalized, and misspelling of will "and I will be there this night"
"what did you find" First letter should be capitalized, "What did you find"
"is not?" Is should be capitalized
"central park" should be capitalized, it is a proper noun (Central Park)
"Tarjet" misspell of "Target"
"The news reporter are already here" is contradictory, are suggests more than one, but "news reporter" suggests one (The news reporters are already here) (The news reporter is already here)
"they look tall with dark robes" "they" should be capitalized
"lear in a human lifetime" misspelling of "learn" as "lear"
The word "I" should always be capitalized.
Hope this helped