Anyone wants art redline (art plastic surgery)? CLOSED

[GesuGesu]

I've done some art feedback in the past for people in the forums such as the one below and I'd like to do more critiques in this style:

Here's another edit with notes on what I changed so you learn about improving your backgrounds. [image] Proper lighting and shapes can make a big difference! I didn't redraw your art at all this time except for the background. To understand contrast and balance of shadows better, try practicing Grisaille technique. You paint the whole thing in monotone first, and add colour after.

Basically, I will try to give fairly objective feedback, and then I try to show you what I mean by editing your presented artwork to match my advice. I can help if it's regarding background, composition, colours, shading, animal anatomy, and most of all, human anatomy. In a way, it's performing plastic surgery on your artwork.

There's actual "plastic surgery" videos on art if you want to see how it works in real time~ (thanks Ran for finding the video!)

My own artwork is around this level if you're wondering if it's worth your time to get feedback from an internet stranger. I'm just your typical anime artist.

I can analyse and edit about 3-5 artworks within the limits of my ability before I close ithe thread!

Please let me try and critique / perform plastic surgery on your artwork!

[CAOMouse]

Please make her more beautiful through your powerful surgery

[Prometheus]

I’ve got this train wreck. Things look off, and I can’t tell what. Besides his obvious hand. Also, if you do surgery on mine, I would like to say thank you for taking your time to do this in advance.

[IndigoShirtProd]

Always looking for good, reasonable criticism. I like this piece but feel like there are little mistakes and some things off about it.

[LCT_m_a_d]

I haven't gotten feedback on this yet. It's still a work in progress obviously so, as much as I'd like some direction, feel free to skip this for a more completed project.

[kyurenai]

No problem! @Kimoisempai Also good luck to everyone here.

[GesuGesu]

I tried to morph it, but some parts cropped horribly.

[GesuGesu]

Here you go! I tried. Your traditional coloring is very solid.

[Prometheus]

@Kimoisempai

Whoa! That’s super helpful! Thank you so much!

[CAOMouse]

Thank you, she look good

[GesuGesu]

Oh, you're really making me stare at this for a long while! There's no major mistakes at a glance, so I had to really get nitpicky. I went for a different way to look at yours since there aren't any huge human anatomy errors. If I could get rid of that flower, your body silhouettes are very good!

[JRHoch]

This is such a cute idea, sort of a before and after, but no one is trying to lose weight!

[GesuGesu]

Which animal is this based off of? A generic large cat species like a lion, mountain lion, etc?

[IndigoShirtProd]

Thanks for the feedback!

[GesuGesu]

I'm dying here I'm no master artist and I have no formal background in the fine arts.

[LCT_m_a_d]

I took concepts from a lion and tiger (more-so tiger) but kept it ambiguous for studying purpose. If its too fineartsy it might not be best for this kind of request understandably.

[GesuGesu]

Yeah ^^;; I'm just your average anime artist hahaha. I've done some furry stuff before, but it was stylized (and you'd probably hate it)