I just read through the three chapters you've got and I think what you're lacking is scene. I don't know if your goal is to have a more flow of thought story that reads like a diary, but even those tend to have concrete scene's we can place the character in even if only breifly. The closest thing you have to a scene is in the begining of your third chapter and I'd love to see you lean more into what a day in this character's life feels like instead of what they think about. It'll help your readers relate more if they can physically place themself in the story. Your world and plot are still more of an abstract concept to me because it's not grounded yet. I have some guesses for what might happen in the future but thats 100% based off of your synopsis.
You've got the interiority of this character down, now show more of their life. And remember the classic saying "show, don't tell." Use your senses like you did in that third chapter and immerse us in the story. You have a good start but I'd love to see your writing grow more.
