So i got this idea for a comic called The Rainy Days. So far i'm working on a short series that has the same basic plot but relies more on the relationship of the main characters. I did this cause i was worried i would lose or not gain any audience from starting chronologically (somewhat chronological). Anyways, i've been looking around and noticed how people could still amount an audience on simple story openings as long as it has a story (not talking foul about gag comics). I would work on the official Rainy Days comic but there are two problems.
I'm having trouble writing it. I got the plot down but the things in between are hard to grasp.
I'm not the best artist and can use help (I'm not dropping the load on anyone. I'm working on it and just need help).
So i'm asking a writer to help. And any artist who stumbles into this is welcome to join me.
Comic Info: So the story is this kid Henri was raised by his mother cause his father left to fight in WW2 for the French Resistance. The problem comes when aliens attack before the Soviets could enter Germany, so an extended war in enabled. Henri was born shortly before the aliens attack and around that time his father is declared MIA. So his mothers works hard as a seamstress and assistant baker to raise her son. Unfortunately, an alien attack takes the life of Henri's mother. Henri thinks he's alone when he remembers his father was only declared MIA. So he has this crazy idea to look for him in enemy lines. He becomes an engineer for the Spanish army and eventually befriends a mysterious agent named Isaac.
The story starts here: Isaac hates aliens and is working to find a world ending device rumored to be in enemy lines. So the two team up and try to solve each others problems. This is when Henri meets and becomes friends with a small, annoying, idiotic, and loud alien he names Frank. Frank and his clone army claim to be abandoned by the other alien forces, but they all have dreams of venturing out into the world and experience human life. So Isaac reluctantly lets them tag along cause they might have their uses. Together they try to end this war once and for all.
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