What first struck me was that the side characters are ordinary, without detail. I don't know how to express this in words exactly. But I noticed it already in the first episode when the main character passed two girls in the school corridor. Maybe you should add some originality to them? The main character has beautiful eyelashes, why didn't the two in the school corridor have them? do you see what I mean?
You definitely need to work on your anatomy. But relax, I need to too xD
Some frames look like they were made in a hurry. It's better not to rush and slowly deliver chapters of good quality. I learned this on myself, the hard way.
You still need to work on the backgrounds. I understand that it is 3d in some places. They need to be pimp-up a bit. I had to learn that in a hard way too. I myself was getting a lot of complaints that my backgrounds are weak because you can see that they are 3d. So I searched for a solution and worked on them as much as I could. It can be learned.
I like the shading, simple. which is the best. The entrance of the main character and showing his face, fact, half covered but well placed position and frame for the eyes. It charmed me.
The story itself is very interesting. Your style is original.
I like the main character, she's not a typical girl from some anime, which is a big plus because those girls are already annoying xD
I hope I helped somehow? If this is your first serious project it's very good. Don't give up. Keep drawing and drawing. With every chapter you will see changes for the better. I already saw the change when I compared the first chapter with the last one. Good job!
