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May 2022

Hi! So I'm almost certain I reviewed your work before. I could view the artwork, but like I've said I'm not really sure how helpful I'll be about it since I know nothing about creating comic art (or any other visual art for that matter). If there's anything specific you'd like me to look at still though let me know and I'll do my best :slight_smile:

I don't mind what bit you look at. All critique and reviews are welcome!

Thank you so much for this opportunity. If you still have Time and energy I really could use a review of my comic. I'm especially unsure, how the Titel and the beginning looks and if I need to change things. There aren't many pages jet.

Soo, I don't need an actual review since I know the comic is liked by the community it's for.
However, I'm curios if someone outside of the established audience can become interested in it.

This is Mystery Action Sci-fi about a living anti-mech weapon trying to make a life for himself on another planet. The art is...difficult in the beginning but it improves a bit as it goes.

If you get to it, a simple yes/no is enough.

19 days later

If you have the time I'd like to throw my own cowboy hat in, This world of smoke and Irons a cowboy fantasy. Which means I thought traditional westerns were too boring. The first chapter is an introduction to the world and It's currently the newest chapter I've made. Please feel free to have a gander and tell me the good, the bad and the ugly.
Kind regards
-The TAG / Mr. Tumultuous / Taggzer

Hi to all the new comments here! Things have been a little busy on my end so apologies for only seeing them now. I'll try to start working through them and hopefully get to all of you with a little review as soon as possible. Thank you for your patience :blush:

@AG289 @Taggzer @Zhengo @blakestackman

I also see a couple of works here I've already reviewed before. @CitrusShines @dsptss78 I could take another look but please direct me as to the specific chapter/things you'd like my opinion on. Can either write it here or send me a message (or you just realized you already got a review from me and you don't need another one that's also an option haha).

Thank you for a response and I was thinking of a review of the overall plot of the story. Read as much as you feel is necessary. Last time we talked you only read about 2 or three chapters. However, if you want to focus on dan specifically, I recommend the mom, revelations, guilty and innocent chapters. It goes more in-depth with Dan's past life.

A chapter or two at most is usually all I can offer considering my time constraints, which is why I usually review the first one or two - because jumping into the middle of a plot makes it so I lack and context and can't really give a proper review. I'm afraid that for the same reason I can't really comment on your plot without reading the 35 existing chapters (which atm I can't).

Hello. I was wondering if you want to take a look at my comic? My readers don't comment much so I don't know if the story and messages were coming across to them properly. I don't need feedback about the art because I won't be able to do something about it due to technical limitations but if you have a comment as a reader, then please comment away.