BradleyStempherComic
Aug '19

So i have been wondering for a bit if the progression in my comic is any good.
To me having a smooth progression between pages and panels is verry important.

for 5 years i have had a art block, but thats been resolved now.
in that time i always got stuck on how i started and got to events that where planned.

So what i tried in the way i have posted the last week.
is to start a question on page 2, and have it asked on page 3.
awnsering it in the next Episode, but while i have answered the question on page 4
i am already planting a new question.

I wondered if this keeps people engaged or gives them too much info to process.
i did this until page 7, but because im on a vacation in a week i posted more pages in the hope
to give something to do in the meantime.

This was one of my methods i worked with.

second, i have been trying to give hints troughout, bringing mystery of what the characters are hinting at.
or feeling.

in the end i want people to care for the characters and care if something happens to them.
so i have been verry carefull in making characters feel sad early on.
Building up the characters before i make a moment like that happen.
while at the same time hinting at their problems and past.

in the end i have been trying hard to achieve the best possible experience in the comic.

So because i wonder if thats the case i ask if some one could see for me what they feel when they read it.
its 15 pages for now.

you can find it here.

I hope anyone who reads this post has a good day further.
and thanks.