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Apr 2018

I have the loglines in mind but I need to work on them a lot. Can someone help me?

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I think you need to be a little bit more specific. And, like, write down what you already have and ask for help to improve from there.
Also, what exactly are the loglines for?

The loglines are for a "class" I'm working with and I've been told that I need to be more specific in the logline, so I thought I'd look to the people here for some help.

Quote the Wiktionary:
logline (plural loglines)

1.A very short summary of a script or screenplay.
2. (nautical) The line fastened to the log, and marked for finding the speed of a vessel.

Well, I did not know this term. Now, I do.

"A Tapas creator struggles to craft a logline and reaches out to the forum for help"

It's pretty much like that.

Protagonist + Conflict + Movement toward Resolution.

In some cases you might add an additional Twist or even a Climax.

Remember, a logline and a teaser are different things. A logline is intended to sell your story to a producer/publisher, while a teaser is intended to entice a reader. Producers/publishers want spoilers; readers don't :wink:

A few more examples, just because...

"A young prince returns home to claim the throne and avenge his father's murder."

Could it be Hamlet? The Lion King? Or even the antagonist side of Black Panther?

"A young girl travels to a far away land where a false dictator commissions her to assassinate a terrorist threat."

Wizard of Oz or a Luc Besson movie?

Have fun. Play with it. Say them out loud. And eventually you'll find the one that sings.