I almost skipped this, but I'm glad I didn't. I have subscribed to your webcomic and found it captivating.
- I enjoyed the landscape and sparkles.
- I really liked the girl...how she was focusing on the beautiful flowers.
- Danger is forshadowed, which makes me care for her.
- Not only that, her parents are sickly
- I love how you draw them, the hands, body.
You don't have to make the fonts so large. There are a whole lot of great free fonts at Blambot Comic Fonts & Lettering
I've heard that Anime Ace font is really good for comic dialog. But you may find another more suitable to your taste. Check out other popular webcomics here at Tapas to see how their dialog and bubbles are done. That should give you a good reference.
I've heard others mention having a buffer. That will help you and any of us comic makers tremendously. You won't be as pressured either, getting your comic updated here.
Also...I find narratives coming from the actual character draw me in closer. I think you should make the girl, the star of your story, speak in her own voice. I feel your story will have more impact if you go in that direction. We, as the audience, will relate more to the girl and her dilemma. We'll feel her pain and joy, which you do a very good job through drawing her. Also you can interject her style of thinking/viewpoint with those words.
Congratulations on presenting your story here. I really thank you and will comment, have fun, and hope for more. I'm looking forward to you touching on my story too. I'm new as well, though I've been working on mines for quite some time.
Don't be discouraged. I've heard it takes a couple of years to be substantiated here. So here's success to both of us! Luv n hugs to you, @mgart1937