Ok just went trough it, and actually added too since I think there is potential there.
As for the comic itself, the story feels like something realistic, a real life danger such as a disease, don't know whatever or not there will be fantasy elements later. You got to always try to connect realistic concepts when applying fantasy ones, it feels more unique and not generic "another one of those comics type of thing", but right now it feels pretty solid.
Art style is very appealing and colourful (Disney-ish too), your skyscapes are very well done with a soft touch to then, which again makes it for a realistic look and landscapes are also very good and impressively detail at times. I wont go trough too much as you only have so much content right now, but do carry on and you will see your art improve further in no time.
As for the speech bubbles, they occupy too much of the pages, try to make then smaller as well as the font, it is not require for it to be that big, unless you specifically targeting Smartphone users. On a PC however it feels exaggerated.
But yeah do carry on with your work and I shall keep an eye, its leading to an interesting storytelling.
If you want something else to read, you could try Acroalis, a fantasy with Sci-Fi elements comic I been working on for a few years.