Well in terms of writing can’t really give a solid review due to it being very early in terms of story. But the banter between characters seem fine. However just due to the limited amount of pages I can’t really say if I like and or dislike certain elements of it, it’s kind of like reviewing a movie at the first 30 seconds of the film.
But the one thing that I would tighten up a little is the comic’s synopsis. Feel that It’s by the numbers in terms of an adventure synopsis. I would look up some of your favorite comics or other entertainment synopsis and go from there to kind of spice things up
The art is solid enough me not to outright drop it. Really like the art style as well as the vibrant colors which is the first thing that actually caught my eye.
I recommend just pumping out more pages, at least a full chapter or two worth so I can actually give a more solid take on the writing which in my opinion is just as important as the art.
Here’s some of my own comic which like yourself is limited in pages. Just recently dropped a new page too.
