As a writer, I have a hard time differentiating between having too much writing and too little. And depending on the plot, I'm not sure if I should dive into the action immediately or begin with a backstory first. Currently, I am trying to get one of my novels into premium but, i'm not a 100% with my story. I would love for someone to give me feedback and criticism on my novel. I don't need you to read the whole story, read how much you want. If you stop reading, I would love for you to tell me why 
My book isn't on tapas but on google docs. If you would like to help, please reply in the comments and I will give you the link
The genre of my book is romance, drama, and horror. It is a young adult book mainly catered to young females (but if you like these types of plots anyone can read really).
Summary (very rought): The Angels are a group of famous celebrities starring in a reality show. They live in one house and their lives are displayed on television. The world is obsessed with them. Their faces plastered on every magazine cover, billboard, and social media site.
Through an unfortunate event, Rayna, a broke university student, is given the once in a lifetime chance of becoming an Angel. And she accepts for the sake of her family.
Wrong move.
In only a few days of her fame, the Angels become locked inside their mansion. Soon, a voice plays through the speakers, cursing the Angels and vowing revenge. The psychopath has the show in the palm of his hands, controlling the cameras and his hostages. One by one the Angel’s disgusting secrets get revealed.
And the slaughter begins. On live television.
Through this horror, Rayna attempts to find out the murderer's identity to save everyone. But after hearing of their disgusting acts, is it really worth saving these devils disguised as angels?
