To be blunt, this reads like AI wrote it. The entire chapter reads like it could be an entire story, especially when you consider that Dracula is considered the King of the Vampires in European vampire lore. While I am not saying that you used AI, I do understand that some people's brains think in very "exact" terms.
My advice goes back to what @HGohwell's comment about execution. From my style and perspective, your first chapter could be expanded into a good dozen or more chapters simply to introduce all the characters, Central 21, bring them to Romania, and have them fight Dracula. Readers like sensory details, just because an event can be summed up in three short sentences, doesn't mean it should.