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Sep 2018

I don't know if this should go into Art/Writing instead, but...


This is the first three possible designs for an antagonist in my comic-- I plan to use these three just to get a general aesthetic and what I want from her, and then add more specificity and make more specific choices. The character is like... If Female Jake Paul had Very VERY minor superpowers, and was able to monetize her social media fame off of that fact! So I tried to make a nice mix between 'hero' and 'instagram celebrity--' your takes?

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I like the one in the middle! She for me, fits the description of how you want your villainess to be~

I actually really like the outfit of the first design, but I like the hair in the third one more!

This was exactly what I was going to say! I prefer the first outfit far and away above the others, but it also has my least favorite hair of the bunch, 3 is my favorite in that dept.

I think design A looks the best for what you describe for the character to be.

Design A has a nice modern sci-fi vibe to it.
Design B looks like a college student going to a party, so that fits your "jake paul" description lol
Design C reminds me of 80s sci-fi with the spandex and belts and all that. If you're going to give her a very modern celebrity personality, that might clash.

I like design A best!! :slight_smile:

I like A!

And this topic can go in either in my opinion, because this is also the feedback category so...

Thanks so much for the feedback everyone! I think I'm gonna do something between A and B, because while I like C aesthetically a lot-- it does give this retro feel, but also a lot more of a like... "Proffessional" hero one, with the gadgets and ear pieces and stuff. (She makes me think of Jem and the Holograms, tbh. Maybe this design can show up later, LOL) Another tiny issue with B is that it does look super amatuerish, and this person is a professional internet celebrity, so it needs to look a little more official? Since the gimmick is being a vlogging superhero, she'd probably work to look the part while not having any like actually useful tools on her, besides like. A pocket, or something.

A is definitely going to be the main inspiration for the design, I think, though!! Thanks so much! (Also, I just noticed, A has like... JoJo Siwa hair. I didn't intend this, but here we are)

I think the outfit of the design A with the face and the hair of design B.

The outfit A gives the best mix of instagram celebrity and superhero and her face and hair on the design B gives better college douche vibes.

Why not use all the outfits? She's supposed to be something of an attention seeker right? So why not have her always changing her outfit?