Quick, help. Can someone point out the grammatical errors on this teaser? Also, do these questions align with the CAPITALIZED WORDS or should they move to another paragraph? I'm about to post my 41st chapter and I noticed that I haven't posted a teaser yet for the second part of the novel.
THE FEMALE LEAD OF INAMORATA has been born on the same day as Iris' Second Evaluation. What is the significance of these two events? How will the two lives intertwine?
IRIS STARTS TO PLAN FOR HER LIFE and is finally taking things into consideration. What kind of plans will she formulate? Will she ever realize her dreams or will those remain a vision?
THE PLOT IS START TO UNFOLD. Will Iris let the story run its course or will she intervene? Will she play god or not?
Who are the new characters that are included in Inamorata? Will these characters have anything in common with her - a minor character from the book?