This was a bit of a longer comic so I mainly focused up to the 10th chapter and skimmed through the rest.
To begin, the art itself is the weakest aspect of your comic. For one, it seems like a lot of the art (especially early on) was cropped and pasted due to the white outlines around the figures. I'm also personally not really a fan of the brush effect on your lineart although that may just be personal preference. Another thing you should never do is use external textures because it really clashes with the rest of the art and breaks immersion. There are some panels that don't blend together which should probably be fixed if you want a seamless vertical scroll. Other than that, it's just a matter of practice and improving your artistic abilities. Everyone starts somewhere and I've definitely already seen improvements from the first chapter and more recent ones.
The panelling is fairly well done, albeit a little generic. There's nothing that particularly stands out, both good nor bad - it just seems like your standard run of the mill vertical scroll. One thing I have to praise though is your bubbling. Your comic is one of the few that I can't complain about the speech bubbles or font. Both are perfectly placed and sized.
The story right now looks like a pretty generic superhero story where the MC is a "chosen one" and fights the bad guys the rest of the world doesn't know about. Between the "shy girl who gets bullied" and "friend who fights on MC's behalf but MC doesn't want them to" cliches, I can't say there's much originality as of now. Like I say for everyone else, that could change in the future and a lot of people focus more on character development and world building before mixing things up and throwing in twists.
Speaking of characters and character development, the characters are probably my favourite part so far. Looking past some of the cliches, the characters seem to bounce off each other well and the dialogue makes for some entertaining moments. Even the internal monologues are fun and gives personality to the characters.
Overall, I enjoyed what I read so far. Even though the artstyle isn't exactly "stand out" and the story isn't super compelling just yet, the characters and conversations between the characters made up for it.
And with that, reviews are open again! It only took just under 2 months to get through the last three, let's see how long it'll take to finish the next.