I'm glad you like it!
when it comes to panel descriptions, I try not to provide details related to art and shot composition, since they take away from the artist's freedom, and I keep hearing about how insulting that is to them. I figured saying whether a panel is a close up and stuff like that would be going too far in that regard, so I tend to avoid them. but I'm still trying to get the balance of which details I should provide and which not, so I definitely hear you about not having enough in the later panels. thanks for reading through my script!