Thanks for the review You aren't wrong on the bases, I used to, but is taking to long and I was getting less panels done. I am slowly using the head method to try and keep proportions correctly. There is no offense in giving your opinion at all
The stiffness is real, but I am trying to be more dynamic with poses and more natural feel to remove that stiffness feeling
Here is my review of yours!
-Art-
Your color are really good. They pop, but not in a bad way, simply that they feel quite alive. They are simple but really good. Your characters design are also great, love the main villain, she is perfect in her role from her look and way she talks!
Is clear you keep improving (outside of the jump you mention in the disclaimer). Your lines become thick giving good difference between background and characters. You make great use of various effects (glow, transparecy, blur).
I do notice blur is the only thing you seem to use for movement, I would try some speed lines,for example: the running in the forest. character has some 'trails' but the background is just a blur, if you add some lines to the floor it makes the movement a bit more pronounce.
-Writing-
Another great improvement area, at first many of the I where in small case among other errors. I'll say that the bubble position on the last one feels a bit off. Usually one reads in a zig-zag pattern (top-left to right then move to bottom-left to the right), but this one is in an arc pattern (took me reading it twice to notice). This is the only instance though, the rest was easy to follow and read.
I really like the various bubbles and fonts use depending on the characters!
-Paneling-
I think you should really try spacing the panels more, I notice there is barely any room between panels. This helps in the pacing and of course it helps when moving from one scene to another (as in when a transition happens). I do like the amount of panels you have per update, just think that if you space them out a bit more it be easier to follow the sequences of moment and the importance of some panels over other (I know we all love each panel we work on...but some just have greater importance to the story).
-Story-
You created a great visual villain and great emphasis on her which works really well. The story is moving at a great pace and the mirror's mystery is still in play giving us reader more interest on what will happen next!