Alright, inbox_anime, Daknight did a great job reviewing your comic, but here is my review on Combula Crystelice.
-Art-
I absolutely adore your art style. It is extremely detailed and you use a very wide variety of poses and angles. As the comic progresses, I can see some great improvements in your line work as well as shading and coloring. I know you started this back in 2016, but you've done great with continuing to improve.
I have to say that the last chapter with the woman tumbling through the air and taking out those guards was reeeaally impressive. I envy your anatomy drawing, it's truly amazing and I can tell you've worked really hard on getting this far with it.
If there is anything left to improve with your art I would say some of the faces come out disproportional. For example, the eyes don't line up properly or the mouth is slightly off center. I recommend flipping the canvas often! Flipping the canvas is a technique digital artists use to easily see if something is out of place.
As a side note, as Daknight mentioned, the watermark is a little distracting. I understand not wanting your work to be stolen, but it does take away from all of the hard work you've put into your work. Instead of putting the watermark over your art, consider just putting just one water mark on the bottom of your pages. I was happy to see you remove it on your latest update. It made your work seem more clean!
-Writing-
The one thing I think needs to be improved most in your comic would be the writing. The writing does get better as the comic progresses, however it's sometimes hard to read the text because either the font is too small or the text box squishes the dialogue together.
There are times where I'm not exactly sure who is talking. This is due to the text box being in an awkward place or the the text box is transparent and the background clashes with the text. And while I think the font really fits with the fantasy aspect of your comic, I don't feel it's practical towards the later updates. The font makes the writing hard to read at times. I think a standard comic font would be easier on your reader's eyes. This is just an opinion and I can understand how you may not want to change it.
I have mixed feelings about using "Dafuq" and "Frack" instead of using actual curse words. The first instance I noticed this was when the dragons returned and attacked the city. This was an intense moment, but with the townspeople yelling "Dafuq?", I felt disconnected from the tension I should have been feeling while reading about people being burned alive and killed by dragons. If you're looking to avoid using harder curse words, I would recommend using the censor method of putting the first letter and then staring out the rest of the word. For example, instead of writing "Dafuq", it could have been "What the f***?".
-Paneling-
You have very abstract paneling methods. I enjoy seeing the different ways you panel your scenes. It was nice seeing how you broke away from using just boxes and you shifted to using organic shapes, especially in your most recent update. Something to consider is to use more space, (you have a vertical scroll comic after all!). There are times when I'm not sure what's happening because the panels are too close together. I love how you often have people placed outside their designated panels, but because of the spacing of panels, I'm not always sure which panel to read next.
Expanding your panels, and utilizing the freedom that vertical comics can give, will also help with some of the issues that occur with the text.
-Story-
You have a very interesting plot line. I love the lore and the idea of a dragon god, but it felt like too much information was given at once. It's very clear that you've spent a great deal of time setting up your world, but as a reader, we don't have much of a reason to care about history. I understand wanting to tell your readers every detail about your world and the history, but the unfortunate truth is that your readers aren't going to care as much as you do about your world UNLESS you give them a reason. This is achieved by giving us characters we care about.
After reading you comic, I was still unsure of who the main character is. You did a great job introducing the dragon, Atavash (really cool name, by the way!), and setting up some conflict between Atavash and the Night's Champion that killed her. However, just as I was starting to get attached to these two characters, as I assumed this was who the comic was going to revolve around, the setting changed and we were introduced to another character and more history.
Aside from the characters, I feel you're trying to have too many plot lines going on at once. After reading your second and third update, I assumed the comic was going to deal more with dragons and the Night's Champion, but I believe the comic actually revolves around crystals. I'm not too sure how the crystals relate to Atavash, maybe I missed that bit of information and if that's the case then I apologize, but the significance of these crystals could have been mentioned sooner instead of the lore about Atavash's death.
In the end, as I mentioned with Daknight, it is your comic, so please don't let my review put you down! All that I have mentioned is the opinion of one person. You have some amazing talent and it's very apparent how much time you've put into creating your world. Keep up the great work!