Okay, I'll give you some advice, just please stop spamming the forum with new topics constantly. I can see you're impatient to get attention and feedback for your work, and I sympathise, but the first lesson to learn here is that improving and making a good comic that gets people's attention will both take time.
You are still very new to making comics, and the areas you need to work on are your fundamental basics. Get a copy of the book "Making Comics" by Scott McCloud and read it all the way through. Try to spend a bit of time every day doing drawing practice of people. The book "Figure Drawing for All its Worth" by Loomis can be found as a free PDF here (Warning before clicking link, this book does content some light artistic nudity), so read that too and spend some time on anatomical studies.
Read lots of comics and pay attention to things like how they place characters in panels and environments to create pleasing compositions. Try to incorporate the use of a variety of "establishing shots" (shots far away that show the characters at a distance with scenery) "mid shots" (zoomed in closer to show just the interaction between characters or a person's actions or body language) and "close ups" (zoomed right in on just the character's face to show their expressions and emotions) in your work.
Best of luck on your comics making journey.