I like your comic so far, you are doing a nice job building up the narrative but, you should show the creation of the world instead of the characters talking about would be more effective. You don't have to show anything that would spoil any plot points later down the road. Just do a basic summary of the creation of the world, the version of the legend the common person in your world knows about.
The page layout I would say is your greatest strength each page looks like an illustration based on its quality. Though sometimes you overlap speech bubbles in two different frames which makes some pages hard to follow.
Overall, you have a comic with nice presentation but showing the legend of world would hook people a little easier than the intro scene you have right now.
Anyways, I was also wondering if you wouldn't mind taking a look at my short story "My Hollow Heart.