(COMPLETE)I Will Read/Comment/Like the 1st 15 chapters of your Novel if you Read and Critique the 1st 10 of mine! 5/5

HippieGhost 2021-05-08 23:19:22 UTC #3

I'll be able to do this tomorrow if all goes well! I'll gladly give you critiques. Just lmk what level of depth you want to the critique.

ratscout 2021-05-09 05:09:37 UTC #4

No worries! Since I'm offering I'll go ahead and read yours presently! Would you like a critique or no?

caelinalexis 2021-05-09 05:21:45 UTC #5

YES PLEASE i will do the same for you

Stargazer31 2021-05-09 09:52:38 UTC #6

I'll critique you! It looks interesting, and I just subscribed. Here's mine.

Stargazer31 2021-05-09 10:01:55 UTC #7

Just read the first 10 chapters. I like it! Rory is an interesting character, and I like hearing about his internal struggle, and his family issues. I think that the fairies are a very interesting concept too. My only real critique is that I'd like to see more of the fairies, but I'm sure that they'll show up more later on.

sxxaint 2021-05-09 16:11:49 UTC #8

Definitely about time I take you up on this. I'd love to hear your thoughts on Stains critique via PM would be awesome, but also lemme know if any of the CWs bother you 'cause they show up in the first 15

ratscout 2021-05-09 17:55:23 UTC #9

I will add you to the roster and I would love as in-depth of a critique as you can manage with whatever time you have (like, if you're super busy don't feel too pressured to write a novel, but whatever you can manage is fine)

ratscout 2021-05-09 17:56:00 UTC #10

I will add you to the roster! I'll get to your story as soon as possible!

ratscout 2021-05-09 17:59:30 UTC #11

Good to see you~! I know already commented on some of the chapters, so I will re-read the chapters I have already read as a refresher, and I'll just comment on the chapters I haven't read as-of-yet! I'm gonna sound like a boomer saying this, but what is a CW? XD

I will add you to the roster~!

ratscout 2021-05-09 18:05:22 UTC #12

Thank you for reading so fast! There is some stuff about the fairies later on, but maybe on future edits I'll add in a little more about them sooner. <3

mossiroots 2021-05-09 18:12:30 UTC #13

I have a comic- but I will go and read and comment on my thoughts cause I like to do that.

ratscout 2021-05-09 18:21:45 UTC #14

If you're interested, I will add you to the roster! I think all the people with novels who are interested have already commented!

mossiroots 2021-05-09 18:23:45 UTC #15

That would be awesome cause I'm still learning. Thanks (but if you burn out or run out of time don't worry about it I totally understand)

sxxaint 2021-05-09 19:51:56 UTC #16

awesomee! I'll get started on yours tonight or tomorrow depending how time works out

and it's just a content warning hahaa

HippieGhost 2021-05-10 00:42:32 UTC #17

Sounds goo! I'm 3 chapters in so far. had to stop because the app was being buggy but I'll get the rest soon

foxnflames 2021-05-10 01:27:24 UTC #18

I’m down! I can get it done between today and tomorrow. And I don’t mind doing a critique as well! Let me know how in depth you want it and I can make notes as I read. Like certain things you’re looking to convey and think need improvement.

ratscout 2021-05-10 04:48:54 UTC #19

Excellent! I will add you to the roster!

ratscout 2021-05-10 04:49:25 UTC #20

Would you like a critique, too?

I will add you to the roster!

foxnflames 2021-05-10 05:02:06 UTC #21

Sure, you can PM it to me.

HippieGhost 2021-05-21 18:43:52 UTC #22

@ratscout I finished my 10 episodes, and see you got mine. Would you like detailed critique in here or in a PM?