As you've probably noticed I've read the first 10 of yours (I know we agreed to 6 so no worries if you don't have time to keep going, I was just into the story).
I took some notes while I was reading, and will need a little time to turn them into a coherent review. Do you want notes on things like typos (I always create a bunch of typos whenever I do a rewrite), or just content, pacing, etc.?