I need some constructive criticism for my webtoon! I just got more art supplies and before I make/upload the new episode, I sorta need some help. I don't have an editor or anything like that, so any opinions (about things that are achievable) would help!


Thank you!

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    Jun '21
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Hey there,

I just took a look at your webtoon and I think your art style is really cool! I really like a more traditional vibe in a webtoon, because it's not done that often. I took a look at the first and last episode and the main issue I think that needs fixing is establishing your characters in the space. You do a great job of drawing the backgrounds and the characters, but it's kind of confusing where the characters are in relation to each other. I'll use your latest episode, Episode 9, as an example. You show a a bedroom with a bed in it, and then later a boy (not sure his name) jumps into the bed, but I'm not sure where he was standing before that. What would really help is some more overhead/bird's eye shots to show the viewer the whole space and where the two characters are in that space. So that later, when the third character pops in the doorway, we know exactly where everyone is relative to each other.

BTW, do you read Stagtown? I think you could get a lot of inspiration from that creator in terms of how she tells stories! I think you guys have a similar vibe in art style.