these are neat, I think I prefer the first one, but both are neat
This might be inappropriate, but the angle of the character and the location of the bottom reversed heart makes it look like the it's the character's butt.
Oh this one is a joy, I can see a lot of work went into it, and the action and pose tells that you most likely already have several comics unto your belt already, great job!
The use of silhouettes is clever, although I would recommend using some fonts for the texts, it's one of those things where someone else already did the heavy lifting, and it helps so much for readabillity.
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