Critiquing First Chapters! A hit or a miss?

AanchalBudhiraja 2021-02-25 09:56:30 UTC #1

Hello! Welcome to the critiquing thread!

First chapters are super important. It should set the tone for the entire novel and hook the readers. It's always a struggle to get it right the first time. So this thread is for everyone who would like to know if their first chapter was a hit or a miss!

I'll be critiquing the first chapter of your books or comics. Just leave this info:

Link to your work.
If you want feedback on the forum or in the comments of the book!
Only one request per person, please!

In exchange, I would love some critique/feedback on the first chapter A Wish For Death of my newest book Darkly Ever After. You can leave a comment there in the chapter itself

Link:

Lucca_Vendramel 2021-02-25 11:08:30 UTC #2

I'd like critique on my first chapter! The art is kinda bad, but thanks to feedback I have improved very very much over the last chapters! I'm currently planning on remaking it, but i'm slacking on it lmao
I'd like the critique to be on the comic, please!

DaisyYoung 2021-02-25 11:10:50 UTC #3

Please check mine out!! I will have a look at yours as well u3u

AanchalBudhiraja 2021-02-25 14:42:50 UTC #4

Okay! Checking it out

AanchalBudhiraja 2021-02-25 14:43:15 UTC #5

Sure! Added to the list

KoreanTacos 2021-02-25 14:57:33 UTC #6

Sure go nuts, you can post it here in the forums

Inspector_Spinda 2021-02-25 15:02:27 UTC #7

Comments critique!

Pony_wearing_a_hat 2021-02-25 15:11:31 UTC #8

Alright, Here's my novel. Feedback in the forum please!

Slimm 2021-02-25 15:20:15 UTC #9

i just published my first chapter a while ago, and since I'm fairly new to the community, I would love to hear your feedback! Definitelty checking out Darkly Ever After too the cover is gorgeous.

This is mine:

djourner 2021-02-25 16:31:29 UTC #10

Though technically the first chapter of my novel is the entirety of the first 4 parts on Tapas, i would be happy with a critique on just the first one.
Provided you have the time for it, of course, no need to worry to much for it.

Also, i left my review on the story like you requested, and i subscribed because of how great it actually read, really well done and with a nice flow to it. ^^

AanchalBudhiraja 2021-02-25 17:08:18 UTC #11

Done with the critique Please don't forget to check the chapter A Wish For Death of Darkly Ever After! Happy Writing!

AanchalBudhiraja 2021-02-25 17:08:49 UTC #12

Done with the critique Please don't forget to check the chapter A Wish For Death of Darkly Ever After!

AanchalBudhiraja 2021-02-25 17:09:15 UTC #13

Okay added to the list

AanchalBudhiraja 2021-02-25 17:09:50 UTC #14

Got it! Added to the list

AanchalBudhiraja 2021-02-25 17:11:12 UTC #15

Added to the list! Also please check out the chapter A Wish For Death--I think you read the introduction page instead! Thank you

AanchalBudhiraja 2021-02-25 17:11:26 UTC #16

Added to the list! Also please check out the chapter A Wish For Death--I think you read the introduction page instead! Thanks!

AanchalBudhiraja 2021-02-25 17:11:53 UTC #17

Added to the list! Thank you for your critique!

lunagraves714 2021-02-25 20:55:44 UTC #18

I just added a new beginning chapter to my main novel that I would love some feedback on! The forum or a comment is fine, whichever you prefer.

momoikhile 2021-02-25 21:05:21 UTC #19

I would LOVE to get a critque because I just uploaded my new comic yesterday!

Ranty-cat 2021-02-25 22:35:19 UTC #20

You can give the review here or in the comments. It's totally your wish.