AanchalBudhiraja
Aanchal Budhiraja
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@Lemon_Demon @noenoh Done with your critiques! Sorry for the wait, I'd a busy office week! 
Hi Rachel! I read the all the prologue parts of ABOTN. It's absolutely hilarious! Loved all the classy build up to his thesis and indeed what a thesis it was! Your writing is fast and pacy and each chapter was like a sweet fun delight. Although Harriet is only introduced in the 1st chapter, I thin…
@rajillustration Thank you for leaving the feedback! You totally caught my own hesitations about posting such a heavy first chapter. While I don't want to justify posting it, it would have ended up as a backstory or the prologue (which can be off putting for readers.) The real story should pick up f…
@Lemon_Demon @noenoh @CytricAcid Hi guys! I'll start the critiques with those who have read Darkly Ever After first 
Please ping on the forum if you're done reading, and I'll surely start on yours!
@AnimeKitty @rajillustration Thanks for your amazing reviews and feedback. Really appreciated. I'm …
Hi! Here's your critique: That was an intense and amazing start. The story had a strong opening and ended on a great hook. Your writing style and vivid descriptions were perfect for the genre. Genuinely enjoyed reading every word of it! Just a tip: some of the dialogue tags had some grammar issu…
Hello! Here's your critique: The first chapter was nice, liked the bits of pieces you added for Keenan's past without making it an info dump! The chapter really picked up its pace in the second half. The robbery scene was great and it ended on a hook and a promise--that the hero is now going to em…
@lunagraves714 @momoikhile @Ranty-cat done with your critiques
@denny_b_reese @HopefulAttempt starting on yours!
Hello! Here's your critique:
That was a total hit! The concept packed punch and it was entertaining. I liked your take of the 'Helen' show and her candid interviewing style. You did a wonderful job with your art and the engaging dialogues! I genuinely enjoyed the whole episode
@lunagraves714 @momoikhile @Ranty-cat Starting on it! Please don't forget to check out A Wish For Death chapter on Darkly Ever After! Thank you!
Added to the list! Thank you for your critique! 
Added to the list! Also please check out the chapter A Wish For Death--I think you read the introduction page instead! Thanks!
Added to the list! Also please check out the chapter A Wish For Death--I think you read the introduction page instead! Thank you
Got it! Added to the list
Okay added to the list
Done with the critique Please don't forget to check the chapter A Wish For Death of Darkly Ever After!
Done with the critique Please don't forget to check the chapter A Wish For Death of Darkly Ever After! Happy Writing!
Sure! Added to the list
Okay! Checking it out
Hello! Welcome to the critiquing thread! First chapters are super important. It should set the tone for the entire novel and hook the readers. It's always a struggle to get it right the first time. So this thread is for everyone who would like to know if their first chapter was a hit or a miss! …
Hi! It's my first time writing a novel with an LGBTQ+ protagonist. Although the story is more of a paranormal mystery, I look forward to writing some good romance! Darkly Ever After The first rule is to never let them know you can see them. The second rule is to never make a deal with them. And…