Critiquing First Chapters! A hit or a miss?

HopefulAttempt 2021-02-27 23:30:42 UTC #47

Thank you so much! I'll definitely be sure to go back over it! I just read your first chapter, and it's really intense, and does a great job hooking the reader! I wish you the best luck with your series! Thank you again!

aslansniece 2021-02-27 23:42:42 UTC #48

I would appreciate any constructive criticism you might be able to give me too - I'm always looking to improve

Lemon_Demon 2021-03-01 03:17:20 UTC #49

omfg your story is lit! I even commented, idk if you can see that yet.
Can’t wait for the next chapter. Pacing is pretty good, descriptions in the right amount, and yeah its pretty good for now.

strawbisci 2021-03-01 04:15:39 UTC #50

heres my comic! the first 3 are meant to be read as one but id be happy with you just reading the first too, id like the crit on the forum please!

CyberAxl 2021-03-01 15:48:57 UTC #51

Just finished my first chapter! Would love to hear your feedback

jcmraz 2021-03-01 16:23:36 UTC #52

Always interested to see what people think and how I can improve

thecrystalrook 2021-03-01 18:21:04 UTC #53

Hi! My first chapter came out almost 2 years ago but why not see what new readers think, right? The artwork isn't great in the first, so this should be a good test of the story

AanchalBudhiraja 2021-03-05 16:37:06 UTC #54

@Lemon_Demon @noenoh Done with your critiques! Sorry for the wait, I'd a busy office week!

noenoh 2021-03-05 17:20:08 UTC #55

Thank you so much for the review! And thanks for taking the time to do this. Much appreciated 🏻

ringowatanabemanga 2021-03-05 20:18:09 UTC #56

please let me know what you think! thank you https://tapas.io/series/Dragon-Tofu/info

techstylesstudio 2021-03-05 20:53:23 UTC #57

Well the first three episodes are the first chapter of my comic, so give it a read and let me know what you think of it. Feedback does help a lot, thanks.

sc101 2021-03-05 22:06:45 UTC #58

feel free to choose if you'd like to critique mine! I'd appreciate if you send the feedback in the forum if you decide to critique it.

Lemon_Demon 2021-03-06 06:25:52 UTC #59

Thank you very much !!! it means a lot, hope u stay well and healthy ^^

Fedriz_Marini 2021-03-06 10:41:33 UTC #60

Before leaving my Series, I'll proceed with the Comment on your first chapter:
Love how the first Episode introduce everything like a movie trailer, with the blurb and the list of cast, it's quite creative for a novel, I gotta admit.
Love how the first real episode already set the tone, if not, how in part relatable that is, having partially experienced something slightly similar when I was a kid, so, maybe it's also something more subjective speaking, but still, it sets the tone quite well, might not be my kind of genre, but still.

So, from episode 1 to 5 actually made up the first Chapter (Or technically correct "Prologue") of the story, then each Chapter following the two interludes act all as singular stories (As it is an Anthology, for now).
As the first chapter is divided in 5 pieces, It would be better to leave the feedback here on the forum.

Enjoy your Stay, Have a nice day!

writeryoanroturier 2021-03-10 09:09:52 UTC #61

Hey man, I'll do that!

Here's the link to my novel:

Leave a comment, I probably won't read the review on the forum.

I'll leave a comment on your first chapter. If it picks my interest I'll read and leave comments on your other chaps.

Peace out!

arbiterswake 2021-03-11 03:36:58 UTC #62

Thanks for this thread. If you could leave your critique here on the forums I'd love it! I'll check your comic out as well.

JoshRaid 2021-03-11 03:39:12 UTC #63

Iridium 2021-03-11 20:32:34 UTC #64

Greetings!

1. Links (Bilingual)

2. About Feedback
Either way is fine by me! If you prefer the forum, I'll read and reply! If you prefer on the comic, I'll read and reply as well!

I'll make my best to reply on your book as soon as I can!

sorin_gran 2021-03-13 03:07:11 UTC #65

Critique is greatly appreciated!

ruqi 2021-03-13 18:32:58 UTC #66

Hello, good day! Thank you so much for the thread. I would really love feedback. You can place it here in the comments, if that's easier. I have already read and commented on your work, which was exceedingly well done, by the way. There wasn't much of anything that I could give criticism on. Keep up the good work!

I'm currently on the Prequel stages of my novel series, Fug & Furor. Book 1, Ice & Ichor, starts soon. Please check it out if you want to, and I hope you enjoy it!