This is the first ever work I've published, and there's lots of things I'm wondering about:
- The art style has been evolving through the pages, is it noticeable? (If so, is that bad?)
- Does the pacing make sense?
- Are the events easy to follow - does the story make sense? (things left unexplained on purpose don't count - too much of them perhaps?)
- It hasn't been read a lot. What makes people want to click on your comic? All you see is the title and the thumbnail, not much to play with.
Some things you just can't tell yourself, which is why I'm turning to you guys, in order to improve myself for the upcoming chapter 2.
TL;DR: Feedback please!
