Did you miss me?

[MushroomChild]

I'm back!! And I have been working on my comic I watched I lot of tutorials about body proportions. Did I get better? IF YOU CLICKED NO ON THE POLL TEL ME WHY

[MushroomChild]

• Yes you got better
• No you didn't get better

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[TroyVSTheWorld]

I, for one, am glad to see you back

[MushroomChild]

aww thank you! I was worried​

[Lensing]

I don´t know you but I think this drawing looks nice

[MushroomChild]

thank you It's better then my original design! (I certainly got better with proportion

[MushroomChild]

Oh! also my brother did the big pride flag in the background

[darthmongoose]

Looks like an improvement. It's good that you're challenging yourself by putting lots of characters in the scene with poses that interact with each other. Keep at it!

[MushroomChild]

yas thank you! I like drawings with a lot of things going on

[MushroomChild]

ok. people, I know I came across as a mean last time. But please, even if you think I got better you can still give me feedback

[IndigoShirtProd]

Personally, I don't think you got better, but I'm also not saying you got worse. It's been less than a week and I looks like you're in a similar place. But keep working at, use the resources provided to you, watch more tutorials, and be patient with yourself. And glad to see you back.

[NickRowler]

There is some improvement

I would suggest maybe scanning your pictures. If you don’t have a scanner, photograph your pictures in a well lit area or room. Then crop it, because we don’t really need to see your bedroom.

[MushroomChild]

thank you for the feedback

[MushroomChild]

ok. I do not have a scanner but I will try to crop it

[TAMAnnoying]

If you don't own a scanner a great way to take photos of your work to make cropping easier is to buy or make yourself a light box

There are ones you can DIY with a cardboard box and white construction paper. This means you don't have to take pictures of your bed and you can have an easier time adjusting the color and contrast in whatever system you use after you upload it to your computer.

[MushroomChild]

Omg! thank you so much! That is really helpful!

[officialgenesis]

I am not an artist so I can't give any helpful feedback on the art, however I'm glad you are working on improving your skill. That's a step in the right direction so keep it up. And welcome back!

[MushroomChild]

thank you so much! (i wasn't sure that you guys would be happy that a came back after the whole thing)

[DualDragons]

I answered no but I wouldn't say you didn't get any better. That would be harsh. However I do think you still have things to improve on. The characters (especially faces) look very flat.

I think this tutorial is nice to follow as a start, don't feel afraid to use construction lines and shapes to draw your characters. I think that's what lacking in your drawings.

[MushroomChild]

thank you I admit that I I'm bad with faces