I was just about to comment x'D perfect timing.
It looks very very interesting, and it sets the lore for the story nicely <3 but I have to ask you to please reconsider editing the text ;; it was very hard to read sometimes c': the font isn't very clear, especially when small or in big blocks of text, and the color didn't help sometimes.
I really dig it and I'm super excited to see how it goes, but I think if you edited the text a little it'd help readabiliity a whole lot
Best of lucks, I'll be around to see how it goes!
Also, as a note, I think this was my fave panel <3
This + the whole ending with the objects in the beach.