Drop Your Novel, I'll be your critic

LOKIEL 2024-04-23 19:20:09 UTC #25

Would love a critique!

jr3indisputable 2024-04-23 19:29:25 UTC #26

I'm hooked and possibly addicted. The way you structure the novel is chef's kiss. Then there's that trope of isekai that makes it familiar and easy to navigate through.

Very funny and yet captures a different emotion than a simple laugh.

10.05/10.

Vayvaction 2024-04-23 19:56:58 UTC #27

If you could review mine please...

daight90 2024-04-23 20:10:23 UTC #28

@jr3indisputable

You give off a really funny and cute vibe, the way you describe other people's work in combination with your profile picture made me chuckle.

Some how I find your profile picture to be really captivating, I can't help picturing you giving thumbs up with that expression while describing other works.

I rarely laugh or chuckle and you really made my day.

jr3indisputable 2024-04-23 22:48:01 UTC #29

Did you just critique my critique? Lol thanks so much!!!!

jr3indisputable 2024-04-23 22:48:45 UTC #30

This is one of the best uprising novels I have read. You eased me gently into full-immersion!

9.7/10

authorautumnbanks 2024-04-23 22:52:03 UTC #31

I would love to get feedback on my novel. Thanks for considering!

jr3indisputable 2024-04-23 23:06:38 UTC #32

I don’t understand your story’s view retention. After all, your story is well-made.

Let me start by emphasizing how well edited and formatted your work is. Very clean, and I appreciate it very much.

The story itself is an actual masterpiece. It holds so much potential. Don’t mess it up.

I have read as far as I need to give a critique.

One thing, though, I don’t get your Title. I don’t think the title is enough to gain clicks. Other than that, very well-made.

9.87/10

mg_xiii 2024-04-23 23:15:35 UTC #33

It’s my first time writing something and I’m trying to do it in english since I know it would reach more people. I’d love to know if it’s at least alright.

skidiggy 2024-04-23 23:16:58 UTC #34

My skin is as thick as tissue paper, but your comments are appreciated.

LOKIEL 2024-04-23 23:29:32 UTC #35

Thank you for the kind words! It’s funny you mention the title though, I just dropped it in the recent chapter

binahwrites 2024-04-23 23:50:52 UTC #36

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HostileFren 2024-04-24 04:26:26 UTC #37

Here's mine, I would appreciate any feedback you have for me. I got back into writing only a few months ago, so its still definitely a learning curve for me

SumireHime 2024-04-24 08:52:19 UTC #38

That'd be cool. If you aren't into it, no worries.

shadaexsol 2024-04-24 08:54:36 UTC #39

^-^ i’m nervous, bc its my first comic

angelic16demonic13 2024-04-24 09:03:40 UTC #40

Hello jr! I will be too glad if you drop your critic for my novel. This is my first time in writing so bear with me.

1001001sh 2024-04-24 09:27:04 UTC #41

I'm testing the water in this platform. I hope I could find my readers here.
This is my 2nd published novel. I hope some of you will like it.

perezathena312 2024-04-24 14:56:20 UTC #42

I'm a little nervous, but come at me bro!!

Vayvaction 2024-04-24 16:54:18 UTC #43

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

jr3indisputable 2024-04-24 18:23:00 UTC #44

Yes, keep uploading, I read through it all already.