So here's the thing. I've been writing this big sci-fi/adventure story for a while now, but I've stopped for about 6 months. I want to get back on track and keep writing it, but the chapters are a little long, and also written in a different format (a script-like writing). I need someone who could give me an opinion in the first chapter (which is a little bigger than the others since it's like the pilot), to tell me if it's drawing your attention and what did you feel reading it. Please DM me if you can help, I'll totally trade this review for likes or follows on smth.