So... read through your comic and here's the feedback I have.
Pros: Good understanding of dark, light and grayscale. A lot of the time it can be hard for artists who work in grayscale to make art that doesn't get a bit tiring to the eye, but your style doesn't have that issue! The limited shading and sticking to mostly lineart and black/white is a good choice in making the reading process easier and the creation process easier as well.Though not too many characters have yet been introduced, I think you understand character design well also. I didn't have any issues mixing up characters even if the designs are simple (which I generally prefer to complex ones) and most characters being the same age. The choice of fleshing out environments in certain panels while choosing minimalist panels in others is also handled well. As a last random note, good job with the doggo! Wish I could draw dogs that well
Cons: The biggest issue I have is in the anatomy, and actually in a very specific region: the arms. You draw torso and head proportions well and hands specifically very well! But the biggest issue I have is the length of the arms and the muscle structure. However, I think this can be solved relatively easily through anatomical practice. In fact, the issue with the arms is steadily improving, even in this limited number of pages, so I think if you keep practicing/drawing, the issue should go away eventually. A second issue I have is the hair. While I understand that it can be a stylistic choice, I would recommend spending more time in drawing individual strands of hair. Like, not thousands or anything, but maybe divide each strand you have drawn right now into at least three? For me, the limited rendering of hair stands out from the rest of the level of art and I think spending a bit more time in that aspect would really help. Lastly, as a small and relatively easy thing to fix is the size of the font. While you understand bubble positioning well and it is generally easy to follow the font is too small for me at least. I'm reading on the computer and I don't know how mobile readers could manage.
That's about all I have to say! Story seems interesting and you update regularly which is good! Also, love the name of the comic, really catchy
If you'd like to give some critique of my comic feel free! However, for subbing, only sub if you are actually interested in reading.
Let me know if you have any questions and best of luck with your own comic!
Side note: @travelercomic you have such a cool style! just wanted to let you know