Hello guys. So, a long time ago I had this detective/mystery project in my head, and only recently I managed to finish it. I would really appreciate a feedback on the first 2 chapters that I published. I didn't publish it on Tapas yet 'cause it has a small amount of maximum characters. I can also give my feedback on your story as well. Oh yes, if you think the characters lack a physical description is because each of them get one in each chapter (Raven in chapter 1, Andrew in chapter 2...). Thank you all!
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