So I wrote a bunch of these in finnish in like....2007-2010 ish. I transliterated them back them, but I've been attempting to actually translate them for this. The originals I compiled in 2012 with digitally painted images into the world's most depressing children's book (if you want to have a look at the pictures you can view it here2)

So anyway, I'd like any feedback you might have, thank you :blush:

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Just from a quick read it struck me that some of the words used are rather advanced, even for older kids. I don't know how translating them might have affected that, but I think you might want to go through and see if you can change some of the word choice to make it a bit simpler.