Hey! I started reading your comic, and right off the bat, I found it very engaging!
I do have a couple critiques, though.
The text is sometimes centered strangely, and it keeps changing sizes, which I find off-putting.
On page 11, you wrote right across the top of the building, making it very hard to read! Try to avoid doing stuff like that. Try to keep your font consistent from panel to panel. That doesn't mean you need to use the same font for everything-- just try to have a font you use for narration, a font you use for dialogue, etc. Don't switch it up on us!
I also know that you're just trying to introduce the beginnings of a lot of character threads-- but remember, keep us hooked! Our attention is precious. Keep the story moving as much as you can, and cut the fluff.
That's all I have for you! I hope that helps!