I want honest feedback on my recent 4 chapters. I want to know what you liked and disliked so I can improve my future chapters. Please be honest. Be as critical as you can.
If you'd like me to review your work in return, post a link, and I'll do so.
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Was it that bad? I saw you made comments, then deleted them.
(I changed my mind, sorry. I try to avoid stories with sex scenes. Please don't get angry...)
It's okay. I just wanted to know the reason.
(Sorry, I think the art was nice tho.)
All your character designs are really interesting~ I love them.
