Greetings! I’m making and basically finishing my first episode. I want to know where to head with the next but I don’t know how the first should end, or if it was too fast paced.
Background/ episode plot:
Two characters start off fighting but then shortly it goes to another fight between a girlfriend and a boyfriend. The 2nd argument is shown because the character from the first scene is supposed to meet up with the boyfriend. A little psychological horror is thrown in the fight because that’s the genre I’m partially using, then it cuts back to the two main characters who are at the meet up spot, then, a reporter is listening in on the conversation that the main characters are having once the boyfriend comes in, recording the retelling of the fight.
Should I go more into detail? Or does the mystery add to the interest and makes episode 2 more desirable? Should I somehow fit in how these people are so important and why the reporter is there? I’m going to explain mostly everything in episode 2, but I don’t know if this is too short (don’t worry, the plot given above is only a snippet of the actual thing)
