@artgeek616
I'm sure plenty of readers will be drawn to your work, but, to be honest, the first thing I thought when I saw these pages was "style over substance." The way you rendering is really interesting; the colors are nicely chosen for the shading and highlighting. But it's in service of what? While the character designs may be well thought out, how the characters look, the stylization, or how the characters are drawn, is not. But may easily come from you being a newer artist in general, new to drawing in this style, or new to using this drawing program. Overall good, but I personally wouldn't read based on the art.