check mine out, i do like to hear what people say
This is amazing. I'll definitely look at some of these and see what I can contribute, give some tips I've learned..
I've got 5 chapters, so anything is helpful so I can have the advice for the future!
That's super sweet of you! Thanks for being so generous.
You can read the first ten chapters of Protective Layer if ya got the time <3.
these are more like serial shortstories pick any story you want
Sorry this took a while guys, more things popped up than I thought there would be. But I got a whole evening free and bunch of cookies, so I'd like to get most of your stories critiqued tonight
Hi there! I have a novel on which I'd love a review, like or not to mention if it happens a subcription. But only if you want to.I sure read through yours, it looks interesting.
A little update: I've decided that 10 chapters per story gets very time consuming. So instead I'll do 5, but that way I'll get to everyone faster and you won't have to wait so long
Don't worry, just do whatever you find better.
Man, I realized this last night too while doing my own thread and I did the exact same thing, haha XD, so no worries.
Hi! I read your novel, what's up on the site already.For unknown reason I read the last chapter first... And only found out later Well it definitelly makes more sence reading it in order. XDGood work though. I sure like the theme of it. And I want to know what really happened in the first chapter!! Well of course the part you didn't write down yet.
Hahaha thank you! There's another chapter coming up tonight, so who knows
Sorry this has all been very delayed guys, but I had some health issues come up and I was advised to take it slow this week. I'll try to get some critiques out of the way, but things will probably be slow for a little while
Here are my two, when you get better. I'm not in a hurry, and your health is what matters. They are both short story collections, so take your pick.
Don't compromise your health just because you feel bad for the delay, health is priority #1
I hope you'll get well soon!
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I'd love if you could read mine!