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May 2024

Did a little reading, and honestly I do like it. I'll agree that the lettering needs a bit of improvement (a tip might be to check if it is readable on phone beforehand as a lot of users read on their mobile device)

That said I like the writing bits. The protag being unsure of becoming Emerald Man before eventually accepting his duty does make me like him more and does a nice job at making him feel human.

Okay so I read a bit, and I have to say that I like the intensity of a few scenes, but a thing that bothered me was the excessive dialogue (only my opinion), because a first episodes shouldn't be too much information dumping, it should be something that the readers can calmly entertain themselves with.

The coloring in a few parts is too intense, especially the color green.

This is all, hope it helped even a little bit :3