Okay so I read a bit, and I have to say that I like the intensity of a few scenes, but a thing that bothered me was the excessive dialogue (only my opinion), because a first episodes shouldn't be too much information dumping, it should be something that the readers can calmly entertain themselves with.
The coloring in a few parts is too intense, especially the color green.
This is all, hope it helped even a little bit :3
