I read the first 4 chapters. I'll get to more when I have more time. Overall, it's pretty good! You have a detailed world with distinct characters and a variety of influences. The anime/old west setting works well, and the pacing is decent. The coloring is very good, the inking is consistent, and the dialog matches the characters and setting well while keeping each individual character distinct. There's a lot positive here.
Some easy fixes are grammar mistakes. The ones that stood out to me were "Your" instead of "You're," "Recon" instead of "Reckon," and "Culptrits" instead of "Culprits." The text varies in size a lot, sometimes getting so small that it's hard for me to read, and I'm on a desktop! Find a size that works for you and keep it consistent!
The art is generally good, but it falls apart in the black/white sections. Those sections look like you intended to color them but ran out of time, as it lacks textures or shading to continue the atmosphere of the colored sections. Those should either get colored or get some screentone shading, something.
My main critique though is on story structure. You have a lot of characters and a lot of subplots all thrown at the audience at once, and it's hard to discern what's supposed to be important and what is just worldbuilding. Yorke's team of soldiers look like they're going to be important at first, but then they get shoved aside in favor of this random miner kid who as far as we know has no prior relationship with Yorke, nor any particular desire to go with him. Why introduce the team if they're not going to be important for a long time? Why spend a whole scene with the mayor when Yorke could just tell his wife he's been "promoted?" Put some thought into which dialogues, which characters, which scenes are important for the audience to know what's going on and why they should care before throwing side plots, tertiary characters, and worldbuilding minutiae at us. As of chapter 4, it looks like what's supposed to be important is a sort of buddy cop between Yorke and the miner kid going after the rebels, but probably less than 25% of our storytime up to that point is relevant to that plotline, and I still don't know what the rebels are about and why they're a problem.
Now, that sounds like I didn't like the story overall - I did. I will continue to read it when I have more time. You're doing a great job overall and your quality level is far above the average. Keep up the good work!
