Hey, stuck here in the lockdown, for new authors put out your comics and novels. I will give feedback on how intresting the beginning sounds and if it will retain readers.
I'm writing this story. It currently has five episodes and any feedback would be really helpful!
I think the concept is great, but the description should include more sentences, reveal an event from the story. Than more readers would click. The first episode and the introduction to the fatasy world will hook up readers.
Thank you for the feedback.
Mine started a couple months ago and only has eight episodes so far
Hey there, I write a fantasy novel. Let me know what you think about it.
Thank you for your time.
Wow, the concept is just awesome and story telling too! The art needs to improve a lot, which it will! and i can see this story ging to great heights!
Here's my romance thriller story. Check it out if you like and let me know what you think.
Would like feedback for my comic please.
Thank you for doing this! Here's my comic
Hello! Here are my works thank you so much for the opportunity!
I would like some feedback, it's always usefull and motivation.
Here are my two Novel
Fingerprints is currently on hiatus - but I think I will continue soon
Here's mine if you're interested! I know these fill up quickly, so no pressure if you can't get to this one
Genre: action, sci-fi
This is my work. I'm sure you'll love it as soon as you read it. If you like it, don't hesitate to subscribe?
Feel free to check out my novel and subscribe if you're interested:
Sure. Hope you'll enjoy it.
This is my work. I'm sure you'll love it as soon as you read it. If you like it, don't hesitate to subscribe,
I hope you like it.
https://tapas.io/series/When-The-Gods-Abandon-Us
I recently posted my novel Broken Hearts. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated
Here’s mine, just uploaded the opening 3 pages today. Thanks for offering feedback and I hope you like this
