FlorenceV
Florence
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Fantasy - Romance - Drama - Action - All Mythologies at Once
Rome - I am big fan of Roman History Tokyo - I want to see this technological city that I see in animes all the time with my own eyes. New York - Spider Man
Read as much as you want [:smug_01:] I liked your novel, prologue ends very funny. [:smile_01:]
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I hope you like it. [:hype_01:]
I just want to reach 25 sub! [:cry_01:] [:hohoho:] When The Gods Abandon Us (Liked your work btw, you should publish it on wattpad too, people in wattpad like that kind of stories.)
https://tapas.io/episode/2278333 [:sip:]
They didn't show up yet, but there are many dragons in my novel from different mythologies. https://tapas.io/series/When-The-Gods-Abandon-Us
I hope you like it. [:hype_01:] https://tapas.io/series/When-The-Gods-Abandon-Us
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Thank you! https://tapas.io/episode/2268524
"And that's the Rosarium Hippodrome." she said and ended her tour.
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Can you review my novel too?
I hope you like it.
I love feedbacks!
The first 2 episodes may seem a little fast-paced for reasons that will be spoilers if I tell, but then you will like the story waiting for you.
Because I knew the story would be too long and I had no previous writing experience, I suddenly started writing scenes that I hadn't thought of to introduce the characters, the world and the power-magic system, and I don't know if these scenes are good or bad. I hope you like it.
The first 2 chapters may seem a bit fast paced, but if you read the rest, I'm sure you'll like it.
Yes there are three mc, and one of the reasons pacing felt fast because Titus was a one-episode character, He will appear in the future, but he does not have much of an event, what happened to him was completely unfortunate. And even if there is a prologue in the title of the episode, the prologue …
As far as i read I liked your story, It remanded me the anime named Fumetsu no Anata e Realism probably isn't your first goal, but there are some absurd things like why the boy wanted friends after he eat Is he reincarnated? Because he is too smart for a little child. But looks like story will be de…
I am waiting with excitement 
(Things like mana of an angel in the prologue are explained in the next chapter.)
The idea of this novel came to me when I played For Honor first time. It just started as Samurais vs Knights vs Vikings vs Mongolian and Turkish Hordes then it became slowly Ragnarr vs Napoleon vs Timur vs Ceasar vs blablabla the great leaders you know Alexander the great etc. Then I created a map a…
Rose Lucius Augustus. (She has red hair and green eyes) She is more arrogant than Escanor and she is the heir of Rosarium Empire (Roman Empire in my series). I just published the episodes she introduced 10min ago but she is 11 yo now 
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There are 3 different main characters in my series that appeal to different audiences. It is difficult to predict the course of the story as none of them has superiority over the other, and each reader can focus on and support the purpose of a different main character. I have finished the first vo…