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summary:
Will I be able to take back everything that was supposed to be mine? I wondered as I look at my blade that covered with blood in the middle of battlefield.
If my struggle sacrificed many lives, isnât it better if I stop and live like I used to? Why did I even born with these responsibilities if it ended up by harming others?
However, I canât stop now.
Born with two different bloods flowing in her. She has a silver hair, the hair colour of the True Heir of Bijouterie Empire. She has golden eyes, the colour that signifies the blood of god flowing in her body. Unfortunately, she has a cold fair skin, a pale skin colour that Dianic clan has.
A clan that known as a devil clan because that clan rumoured has a demon blood flowing in every descendant of Dianic Clan.
Amber Dianna des Bijouterie. A daughter of Emperor Ambra Lyn des Bijouterie and Empress Seira Dianna des Bijouterie. Before she was born, there were a rebellion from Lumina Clan to the Royal Family of Bijouterie Empire. Lumina Clan, one the most trusted clans that serve the throne. Yet their rebellion against the throne killed the Emperor and Empress of Bijouterie Empire. 3 hours after born to the world, Amber lost her parents and then lived with her uncle, brother of the empress, King Sora from the Dianic Kingdom.