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@hehashivemind
Time Fiddler review
What I loved the most about this comic was the art and specially the characters, they're nicely constructed and drawn, everyone can be easily recognized and they're really lovable. The action sequences are great and that chapter in color was brilliant! I must admit though, that the scene where she gets fired and everything before that was a little hard to understand, but maybe it's just me. Overall, I loved the comic and I highly recommend it!
I can't wait to read more n.n
@Jrej
Shades Of Men review
At first sight I wasn't interested, don't get me wrong, it's just that it's usually not my type of story, but as soon as I was reading chapter 2 I totally got into the story, the characters are great, they're different, they are really deep, nothing is predictable and the art helps you to get in the mood of the comic.
I don't know about hobo's life, but I like your perspective. I hope to read more, I got so worried in that last pannel of chapter 4!
@Cielle
Reus review
I like how you start without the actual protagonist, I think it allowed us to have a better understanding of the world before we actually saw her.
I would recommend:
1.- Organizing text bubbles so they are easier to read, I had this same problem with the first chapter of my story, it helped a lot to read other people's work to see how they solved their problems so I could figure out how to do it myself. Also, you can try and read it over and over again, so you can detect any reading difficulties.
2.- Stablish just one or two fonts and a more limited palette for your fonts. That will make the reading experience a lot better and it'll look nicer.
The story is getting really interesting, I like how you started the comic with a riddle, nice touch! And thanks to the prologue, it's easier to understand the protagonist, I'm looking forward to see what's next in your story!
It was amazing reading your comics, they're so different!
My comic is Haytham, a fantasy story about an antisocial guy who's betrayed by his best friend, a story set in an isle with mangrove forests and with a sea monster. Chapter 1 and 2 have a year of difference, I had to finish college haha And I'm still working on my thesis, but I'm not abandoning Haytham again.